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PostSubject: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:38 am

Say HI to Haruhi. I would give myself a 3/10 for this sig.

Tell me what do you spot first for your first glance at this sig.


V2(There is only one thing i like about this is the Placement of the"Let's Jrock" text nothing more)


Note: I find that her face is kinda flat and lacking depth...

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:58 am

The first thing I noticed was effects that I see everyone use. D: Signatures don't have much originality these days... T__T You should also get better high quality renders. o; <

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:05 am

Nathaniel wrote:
The first thing I noticed was effects that I see everyone use. D: Signatures don't have much originality these days... T__T You should also get better high quality renders. o; <

What kind of effect do you see that everyone uses?? And nothing is too harsh to say, if we want to improve.

For the quality part ROFL i over used High pass 5.7 + Overlay too many times.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:57 pm

that render is horrible. Also, the colours make my eyes hurt IMO

The effects are overused, but you used them pretty well.

The Lotus juice on the top is rather dull and boring, and doesn't flow with the rest of the signature, Although, Let's J Rock was done well, although the font could have been better(it's really chunky and pixelly.).

And again, the colours really hurt my eyes.

Not sure, but because of the colours, it may make it look like no depth (too much of similar colours etc). Use more monochrome(?) in your signature, like 9/10 of it is like light and 1/10 is dark. Try evening the tones out.

I'd give it a 7/10

It's been ages since i last PS'd so my comments might be garbage but meh.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 01, 2009 8:19 pm

I saw a girl with a guitar! Nice sig (:
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 01, 2009 10:24 pm

Text Destroys the Tag.
All of it
Completely
Annihilated
Eliminated
Extinguished

Work on Blending, Depth, text, and add a stock image to the backround.
Also, never use bad quality renders.
Remember. Text destroys the tag
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:45 am

Rush wrote:
Text Destroys the Tag.
All of it
Completely
Annihilated
Eliminated
Extinguished

Work on Blending, Depth, text, and add a stock image to the backround.
Also, never use bad quality renders.
Remember. Text destroys the tag

Wrong, "distracting" text kills all, Stock image wouldn't help if you want a well blended sig because the backgraound is most likey to be blurred.

But I do admit that the Stroke i put on the text nearly killed it.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:24 am


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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:47 am

Nath wins
Also, you dont ha ve to there are many ways to blend it in to a stock
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:50 am

I'm sorry, but is it wrong that the first thing I saw was the girl's breasts? What a Face
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:54 am

It took 5 whole minutes to load that one picture. =[ Damn you, Nate.
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:34 am

Alex wrote:
I'm sorry, but is it wrong that the first thing I saw was the girl's breasts? What a Face

ROFL thank you, finally someone who noticed the most catchiest part of this sig. Yes, i was shadowing the whole sig but it came out that only her "Ahem" has to most depth.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:36 pm

Better text, eyes hurt more.
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:16 pm

Sushi wrote:
Better text, eyes hurt more.

Yea, after awhile mine hurts too. There isn't a thing i can do about this sig, unless i take out the effects along with the blackground.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:43 pm

V.2 is much better
Still, text kills it Razz
Try work on more Depth and lighting is a bit strong
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:45 pm

Here's something quick I whipped up
Had only 20 minutes before I had to go so ehhh
Not my best
Usual time is 1 hour+
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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:14 pm

Rush wrote:
Here's something quick I whipped up
Had only 20 minutes before I had to go so ehhh
Not my best
Usual time is 1 hour+

Its quite nice, good use of the render but for some reason I usually glance at the circle thing on the left-bottom before i look at Haruhi.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruhi <3   Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:16 pm

I noticed the brightness in her face. Lolol.
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