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PostSubject: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 28, 2009 5:55 pm

Fly Fly Fly away.
And never Take astray the words that I've given
it's more then i've liven
So take upon yourself that beyond all of this
Will Fly away our Love That can never be Taken.
Its just like a Flame that none of us can contain
It's tame like a lion that none of us can feel.

So take upon our Soul, that we were all a whole
A part of a Life of dreams, And Pies with Cherry Cream on it tonight
So Rest your head upon my shoulder and I won't be all this sober
For all the things that we have seen, even tho we're just a teen
we can live it through and never see tomorrow as i want to see you

So Fly fly tomorrow and never turn back your glance
And warm your hands in mine and don't feel messed
and rest in my arms. I'll harm no part of you or alarm any inch of us
So Don't make a great bug fuss and Open your eyes
And Don't think i tell lies and that we're nice
So Fly away with me
So Say with me you love me
And we'll be like a dove that flys away forever
and never ever looks back

So take upon our Soul, that we were all a whole
A part of a Life of dreams, And Pies with Cherry Cream on it tonight
So Rest your head upon my shoulder and I won't be all this sober
For all the things that we have seen, even tho we're just a teen
we can live it through and never see tomorrow as i want to see you

So Taken into heart, that tore right apart
that noone in the world can see all this twirl,
In which the peace we attained can not be contained.
So Further on we Fight for the light we can not sight
and How much earther i see I can not get the picture of you and me
So Walls bound my right as I say that me and you are like glue
just that we have a clue weather or not to ever rue
upon the night thats nearing us I hear the might of our love
fearing all of us so taking how much we talked so taking how much
we walked just beyond the lake of the heaven of above

So take upon our Soul, that we were all a whole
A part of a Life of dreams, And Pies with Cherry Cream on it tonight
So Rest your head upon my shoulder and I won't be all this sober
For all the things that we have seen, even tho we're just a teen
we can live it through and never see tomorrow as i want to see you

When we met on the top of the day and the layying away of the sun crest out
I can hear you shouting with fun and joy and can feel your hop so say to me about why you can convey to the day of my heart torn apart so Take apon my soul and never leave it as a dark hole and never leave me to remeber.....of that cold winter night in december

So Rest your heart on mine and I'll say that we'll be just fine
So Into the Rest that makes up our dreams, that seems like the rest can fade away that makes the moon just think away of our dreams just flying....flying away...dreams just flying...flying away.


SUCKS amirite?
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 28, 2009 7:11 pm

Nice song (:
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 28, 2009 7:39 pm

Quote :
SUCKS amirite?

You're right. It's awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 28, 2009 8:58 pm

TaChiKaZe wrote:
Quote :
SUCKS amirite?

You're right. It's awesome.
Yes it is (:!
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 28, 2009 10:38 pm

Nice, wanna put some chords in it so i can play it on my guitar? XD
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 1:16 am

vanessaXD wrote:
Nice, wanna put some chords in it so i can play it on my guitar? XD

Me and you both.
Can i add a little solo in there too?
xD
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 6:52 pm

Uhh I was thinking of Going C, then Am, Then G, Then I was deciding between D# or D
Strumm it twicee per 4 words.
lol
And then go G, C, Am, D# at the solo.
Very Happy
The Solo is When we met on the top of the day and the layying away of the sun crest out
I can hear you shouting with fun and joy and can feel your hop so say to me about why you can convey to the day of my heart torn apart so Take apon my soul and never leave it as a dark hole and never leave me to remeber.....of that cold winter night in december
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PostSubject: Re: My song :)   My song :) I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 31, 2009 11:04 pm

woah, the words are just beautiful. (:
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